Omg the guy that raped me gave me oilment for my hands, that got hurt while he fucked me humiliating me at the garden How lovely. Lmao I am sorry, I have read many heavy yandere works, but this shit is so badly written I am almost laughing. No wonder it was writen by a man, bro probably did it while jerking off.
I actually liked the premisse a lot at the start. Her already having been on this world and having a child on top of that with him summoning her back due to sher obssession. I like black flag yanderes so I was excited and let it slide when the chapters started going downhill. Until now, but the way she fell for him is laughable lol. At least wait a bit and develop it, bro. I am okay with the fl ending up with a black flag yandere, like that is the point of works like these, comming expecting otherwise and complaining is ignoring the whole point of the trope. But this writting is simply shit. Like the level of stuff I read on wattpad in 2014. Hell bye. Going back to "Your murder" Inseop at least has charisma, ml is as generic as he looks and fl even worse.
This just shows how a good premisse can get trashed by a shit development.
Omg the guy that raped me gave me oilment for my hands, that got hurt while he fucked me humiliating me at the garden How lovely. Lmao I am sorry, I have read many heavy yandere works, but this shit is so badly written I am almost laughing. No wonder it was writen by a man, bro probably did it while jerking off.
I actually liked the premisse a lot at the start. Her already having been on this world and having a child on top of that with him summoning her back due to sher obssession. I like black flag yanderes so I was excited and let it slide when the chapters started going downhill. Until now, but the way she fell for him is laughable lol. At least wait a bit and develop it, bro. I am okay with the fl ending up with a black flag yandere, like that is the point of works like these, comming expecting otherwise and complaining is ignoring the whole point of the trope. But this writting is simply shit. Like the level of stuff I read on wattpad in 2014. Hell bye. Going back to "Your murder" Inseop at least has charisma, ml is as generic as he looks and fl even worse.
This just shows how a good premisse can get trashed by a shit development.