Sure in terms of characterization and world building, it is a little flat because a lot of the lore are discussed very surface leveled, but it could also be because the main climax and twist of the story is yet to come.
Overall on ch.96, I'll give it a solid 7.5/10 , it's engaging and entertaining enough to be read fully but might reveal some plotholes when you read deeper. Would recommend tho!
Sure in terms of characterization and world building, it is a little flat because a lot of the lore are discussed very surface leveled, but it could also be because the main climax and twist of the story is yet to come.
Overall on ch.96, I'll give it a solid 7.5/10 , it's engaging and entertaining enough to be read fully but might reveal some plotholes when you read deeper. Would recommend tho!