It's sad where the relationship went, I really liked their relation and story but I honestly don't like the whole "I'm not going to let you leave" personality, it's fucking creepy. Even if I liked a person hearing that from them would've seriously creeped me out. I would've much more liked the ml to be begging, groveling, pleading him to not leave him, instead of threatening him to not leave. Yearning is hot, telling someone they can't run away, you'll not let them, is not.
Also the whole being of their relationship and the world that surrounds them, there is something that gives me the ick. It's the fact that there is this inequality shown here, of the different secondary genders, where a lot of the mc's struggles are shown. And instead of fixing or at least trying to be better than the world they live in the ml participates in this fucked up privilege, and the mc only doesn't get to experience any more of the bad cause he's the lover of someone at the top of the food chain (he's someone's mother, daughter, sister, and not he's just someone ifykwim). Idk, the position of omegas didn't change, the privilege of alphas didn't change, the way so many bastards go unpunished didn't change. He just got enveloped in the privilege cause he's the awakened alpha's lover.
But those are my few criticism, besides the not so good ending I really liked the rest of the story.
It's sad where the relationship went, I really liked their relation and story but I honestly don't like the whole "I'm not going to let you leave" personality, it's fucking creepy. Even if I liked a person hearing that from them would've seriously creeped me out. I would've much more liked the ml to be begging, groveling, pleading him to not leave him, instead of threatening him to not leave. Yearning is hot, telling someone they can't run away, you'll not let them, is not.
Also the whole being of their relationship and the world that surrounds them, there is something that gives me the ick. It's the fact that there is this inequality shown here, of the different secondary genders, where a lot of the mc's struggles are shown. And instead of fixing or at least trying to be better than the world they live in the ml participates in this fucked up privilege, and the mc only doesn't get to experience any more of the bad cause he's the lover of someone at the top of the food chain (he's someone's mother, daughter, sister, and not he's just someone ifykwim).
Idk, the position of omegas didn't change, the privilege of alphas didn't change, the way so many bastards go unpunished didn't change. He just got enveloped in the privilege cause he's the awakened alpha's lover.
But those are my few criticism, besides the not so good ending I really liked the rest of the story.