I was really enjoying it up until the stupid ass “I like someone” misunderstanding.
The sorry was already a little interestingly paced but not bad, just quick but since it’s short yeah makes sense, but they under utilized their time.
You’d think he’s assume it was himself because ya know…. I know it doesn’t equate but they’re sleeping together and he’s clearly not talking to anyone else, but no.
And then it just continues? Him “quitting” and then even tho he sees he’s not on best terms with the brother, goes to talk to him? We have no way of knowing he’s not a total dick until AFTER the fashion show when he (brother) says so himself that he cares about him.
Idk it just saddens me a lil that it had potential to be a good, short story but it didn’t quite land anything properly.
I was really enjoying it up until the stupid ass “I like someone” misunderstanding.
The sorry was already a little interestingly paced but not bad, just quick but since it’s short yeah makes sense, but they under utilized their time.
You’d think he’s assume it was himself because ya know…. I know it doesn’t equate but they’re sleeping together and he’s clearly not talking to anyone else, but no.
And then it just continues? Him “quitting” and then even tho he sees he’s not on best terms with the brother, goes to talk to him?
We have no way of knowing he’s not a total dick until AFTER the fashion show when he (brother) says so himself that he cares about him.
Idk it just saddens me a lil that it had potential to be a good, short story but it didn’t quite land anything properly.