This has an interesting plot but the way they executed them is not that good, it feels too rushed, to the point that i didn't really care about their achievements and about safari, i feel like you could've fleshed out the group more, make them interact with each other more and show more of their individuality as a group, then maybe I'll care about their downfall, same with our mc I feel like we don't know much about him either, i like how even we don't know his animal so there's a mystery but they revealed it too soon and in such a, not that cool way? Idk I feel like they want that moment to tug our heartstrings but it didn't
But yeah it's not bad, it just could've been better with a lil more time and chapters
This has an interesting plot but the way they executed them is not that good, it feels too rushed, to the point that i didn't really care about their achievements and about safari, i feel like you could've fleshed out the group more, make them interact with each other more and show more of their individuality as a group, then maybe I'll care about their downfall, same with our mc I feel like we don't know much about him either, i like how even we don't know his animal so there's a mystery but they revealed it too soon and in such a, not that cool way? Idk I feel like they want that moment to tug our heartstrings but it didn't
But yeah it's not bad, it just could've been better with a lil more time and chapters