The smut is excellent as usual. But the story continues to baffle me. I wanted to be sure I wasn't being delusional and decided to fully reread upto this point and holy shit is the pacing just awful. This arc comes truly out of nowhere.
It only feels slow paced because of how long it takes each chapter to come out. Narratively, this redemption arc feels very sloppy, unearned, and rushed imo. I hope there's atleast one more wave of angst. Hopefully they'll resolve the whole deal with Jakeyung letting the other seme see Dan getting fucked.
The smut is excellent as usual. But the story continues to baffle me. I wanted to be sure I wasn't being delusional and decided to fully reread upto this point and holy shit is the pacing just awful. This arc comes truly out of nowhere.
It only feels slow paced because of how long it takes each chapter to come out. Narratively, this redemption arc feels very sloppy, unearned, and rushed imo. I hope there's atleast one more wave of angst. Hopefully they'll resolve the whole deal with Jakeyung letting the other seme see Dan getting fucked.