I like the story tho the story pacing could have been better anyway on to what I really want to write about ✍ I hate the blonde family let start with the brother he the oldest and as far as I gather didn't want to be the head of the family so he fake sick (not saying he doesn't have asthma) and throws his responsibility to his younger brother which okay he was young to but there is a chapter where the mc want to skip lessons and instead of being like okay I will hide you this time because I remember hating my lesson to he just snitch he could have just been like hey little brother your going to be the head so it important for you to take this lesson seriously but hey maybe I just being nitpicky but I not being nitpicky when it comes to the chapter were mc is sad and crying at a banquet or wherever they are and he just like get over your heartbreak it not that deep like he is beyond selfish he couldn't even console his younger brother like (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
On to the father and mother I get they are busy nobles but still that could give compassion to the eldest son who didn't want to become the head of the household but can't spare even a bit for their youngest I get it a sticky situation neither kid wants to be the head but why not talk to both kids or here's another idea have another kid or adopt one but okay they choose to force it to the youngest okay but there is one scene where the father questions/ complains why his younger can't focus of their studies and he did it when he was younger and first thing first he could have been a father and talk to his child he didn't okay second he is the youngest and in his mind he should even be doing this much if heavily studying he is the youngest and typical the spare and third Why didn't you keep the same energy when it came to your oldest I guess he just has a favorite mother isn't any better she just stands there like a doll it like she doesn't have a say on what happens to her children or she doesn't care when it comes time to confront the youngest child lengthy absence from class he likes son I can't bear to raise you and the butler isn't cutting it either so I'm sending you away so my friend from another country can raise you for me (he couldn't bear to send his eldest away ) and the mother must have agreed for what ever reason because she doesn't argue I'm surprised the youngest can still call the family when he returns after all the time I would feel very awkward around my so call family who could bother visiting me while I was far away in another country anyway (yes they sent letters but it not the same as a face to face meet with you family) more about the mother she isn't innocent in this affair either (just because one a by stander doesn't make one innocent especially when you can do something about it) she could have object to having her youngest child sent so far away and the father would have listened to her after all he is smitten with her but I guess just like the father she only cares for the eldest she claims to care about her children but couldn't talk to her child after hearing about his lengthy class absence and they didn't need to send him so far away the could have been like son you have not been to you class we know what you been doing and we would like to talk or they even could have use their friendship like the the better the grade the more they get to hang out The butler did all he could when it came to raising and convincing the youngest to got to another country to become the head of the family the parents couldn't be bothered to help despite eavesdropping by the door I get that the butler was calming him down and they probably didn't want to worson the situation but like why are you just at the door go in you are his partner go in and help the butler with your child and then the father had the audacity to complain as how the butler convince him like you could have opened to door and do it yourself but noooo (no wonder mc had a love hate relationship with his parents) Something that happened with the couple could have been avoided if the family had some compassion for mc I don't get why they were so adamant that mc get married and have a child like his brother can have a child as far as we know he was straight and perfectly able go get a wife and have a child and then that child could have been the next head in my opinion he owes him that much after basically stealing his younger brother life he should have grown up with almost no worries in his life and should have been able to go play freely to bad his older brother stole all that away from him Mc almost lost his childhood love which was the only remaining happiness in his life and even after crying and being so heartbroken his family could careless after his fear went down they barely console him they just watched
To end this long rant let talk about the main event the couple they were okay like I said the pacing could have been better and the angst could have been better written I feel like the author didn't know how to end it but I saw some of the raw and the end together and are happy let just hope the family doesn't ruin it because we just see them get together and kiss a lot and not the family accepting them I wish them well
I like the story tho the story pacing could have been better anyway on to what I really want to write about ✍
I hate the blonde family let start with the brother he the oldest and as far as I gather didn't want to be the head of the family so he fake sick (not saying he doesn't have asthma) and throws his responsibility to his younger brother which okay he was young to but there is a chapter where the mc want to skip lessons and instead of being like okay I will hide you this time because I remember hating my lesson to he just snitch he could have just been like hey little brother your going to be the head so it important for you to take this lesson seriously but hey maybe I just being nitpicky but I not being nitpicky when it comes to the chapter were mc is sad and crying at a banquet or wherever they are and he just like get over your heartbreak it not that deep like he is beyond selfish he couldn't even console his younger brother like (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
On to the father and mother I get they are busy nobles but still that could give compassion to the eldest son who didn't want to become the head of the household but can't spare even a bit for their youngest I get it a sticky situation neither kid wants to be the head but why not talk to both kids or here's another idea have another kid or adopt one but okay they choose to force it to the youngest okay but there is one scene where the father questions/ complains why his younger can't focus of their studies and he did it when he was younger and first thing first he could have been a father and talk to his child he didn't okay second he is the youngest and in his mind he should even be doing this much if heavily studying he is the youngest and typical the spare and third Why didn't you keep the same energy when it came to your oldest I guess he just has a favorite mother isn't any better she just stands there like a doll it like she doesn't have a say on what happens to her children or she doesn't care
when it comes time to confront the youngest child lengthy absence from class he likes son I can't bear to raise you and the butler isn't cutting it either so I'm sending you away so my friend from another country can raise you for me (he couldn't bear to send his eldest away ) and the mother must have agreed for what ever reason because she doesn't argue I'm surprised the youngest can still call the family when he returns after all the time I would feel very awkward around my so call family who could bother visiting me while I was far away in another country anyway (yes they sent letters but it not the same as a face to face meet with you family) more about the mother she isn't innocent in this affair either (just because one a by stander doesn't make one innocent especially when you can do something about it) she could have object to having her youngest child sent so far away and the father would have listened to her after all he is smitten with her but I guess just like the father she only cares for the eldest she claims to care about her children but couldn't talk to her child after hearing about his lengthy class absence and they didn't need to send him so far away the could have been like son you have not been to you class we know what you been doing and we would like to talk or they even could have use their friendship like the the better the grade the more they get to hang out
The butler did all he could when it came to raising and convincing the youngest to got to another country to become the head of the family the parents couldn't be bothered to help despite eavesdropping by the door
I get that the butler was calming him down and they probably didn't want to worson the situation but like why are you just at the door go in you are his partner go in and help the butler with your child and then the father had the audacity to complain as how the butler convince him like you could have opened to door and do it yourself but noooo (no wonder mc had a love hate relationship with his parents)
Something that happened with the couple could have been avoided if the family had some compassion for mc I don't get why they were so adamant that mc get married and have a child like his brother can have a child as far as we know he was straight and perfectly able go get a wife and have a child and then that child could have been the next head in my opinion he owes him that much after basically stealing his younger brother life he should have grown up with almost no worries in his life and should have been able to go play freely to bad his older brother stole all that away from him
Mc almost lost his childhood love which was the only remaining happiness in his life and even after crying and being so heartbroken his family could careless after his fear went down they barely console him they just watched
To end this long rant let talk about the main event the couple they were okay like I said the pacing could have been better and the angst could have been better written I feel like the author didn't know how to end it but I saw some of the raw and the end together and are happy let just hope the family doesn't ruin it because we just see them get together and kiss a lot and not the family accepting them I wish them well