The sex is a bit excessive for what the story is trying to be...

Inky7 December 15, 2025 10:28 pm

This story doesn't really know what it wants to be. On one hand, there is the plot with the drugs and alpha kidnappings, and then there is just smut. I am no prude, and purposely looked for some stories under the yaoi tab, but damn. This man had a cracked skull and crushed windpipe that left him in critical condition after having multiple blood transfusions and surgeries. He was then in a coma for three days, and soon as he wakes up, they are trying to bang? Be so fucking for real!

I'm still here because I do enjoy the story, but the continuous sex is starting to piss me off. IMO, sex should not compete with the plot unless it's PWP or a sex driven plot.

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