Genuinely the only people enjoying this have to be middle schoolers or people with unresolved anger issues. Like im gonna give it a shot and read more but oh my god is this genuinely so bad. It's just a revenge fantasy with poor set up to make you care about the mc, what do we know about him? He got betrayed and his power only works with areas where mana is dense. That's all youre presented with and boom 3 year time skip??? I want to see him actually climb to his power not just boom here you my personal mary sue with a harem to trail behind because why wouldn't the permanent child mc have a bunch of people fawning over him????
Genuinely the only people enjoying this have to be middle schoolers or people with unresolved anger issues. Like im gonna give it a shot and read more but oh my god is this genuinely so bad. It's just a revenge fantasy with poor set up to make you care about the mc, what do we know about him? He got betrayed and his power only works with areas where mana is dense. That's all youre presented with and boom 3 year time skip??? I want to see him actually climb to his power not just boom here you my personal mary sue with a harem to trail behind because why wouldn't the permanent child mc have a bunch of people fawning over him????