Second reading, i love love love this one. I love them so much. I'm in love with art, the smooth storytelling, and appaling characters. It's not especially poetic but it's fluffy and well written. Even the conflicts are cute and adorable.
The only tiny minus point, as it seems to be really a pattern in BL right, is that things are happening quite quickly at the beginning. When Ao says "sorry i've made you wait so long for an answer", it felt wrong (just lightly, cause they're so cute and perfect -and handsome omg) because it didn't felt long between the moment Ryouta was telling his felings and that moment under the rain.
Second reading, i love love love this one. I love them so much. I'm in love with art, the smooth storytelling, and appaling characters. It's not especially poetic but it's fluffy and well written. Even the conflicts are cute and adorable.
The only tiny minus point, as it seems to be really a pattern in BL right, is that things are happening quite quickly at the beginning. When Ao says "sorry i've made you wait so long for an answer", it felt wrong (just lightly, cause they're so cute and perfect -and handsome omg) because it didn't felt long between the moment Ryouta was telling his felings and that moment under the rain.
But as i said, i LOVE this one, so much.