This came from 5/5 to 3/5 real quick

a burning hill December 17, 2025 10:25 am

This has such good potential but unfortunately due to circumstances and ofc the author's limitations, it wasn't fully realized. I enjoyed the first half very much but it suddenly went nowhere when the second hand started. Not only that, I personally was a poly truther or at the very least a Kael end game enjoyer so this fell very flat for me. Still, I enjoyed the journey and hopefully I'll read more of a similar concept to this in the future. Solid 3 stars out of 5

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