I thought this was pretty bad but still passable at first but then it turned horrible real quick lol. Even without the last chapters, the story feels bland and shallow. It reads like a fanfic self insert that’s not thought through—the plot is all over the place, we never learned to care for the universe at all. The characters are so boring, it’s like they have a specific trope for them and nothing beyond that. I almost stopped reading but since it’s short I forced myself to finish….
I thought this was pretty bad but still passable at first but then it turned horrible real quick lol. Even without the last chapters, the story feels bland and shallow. It reads like a fanfic self insert that’s not thought through—the plot is all over the place, we never learned to care for the universe at all. The characters are so boring, it’s like they have a specific trope for them and nothing beyond that. I almost stopped reading but since it’s short I forced myself to finish….