This story felt like it had massive chunks missing in every chapter... everything was just surface level storytelling, background stories missing, relationships barely explored, whole dialogues skipped over, inner monologues barely told, not to mention the missing R18 scenes at the beginning. This story had an interesting idea, but only managed to tell it on a surface level :/
This story felt like it had massive chunks missing in every chapter... everything was just surface level storytelling, background stories missing, relationships barely explored, whole dialogues skipped over, inner monologues barely told, not to mention the missing R18 scenes at the beginning. This story had an interesting idea, but only managed to tell it on a surface level :/