Good, but not perfect

JustBeingMyself September 7, 2017 7:23 pm

It's okay I guess. But 1st story should have more development. Like how Momotarou 1st come to appear. And that girl is just like a side character only. As if only to be used. I want her to have more meaning in the story then just "food" or a place to stay.
Still was an interesting plot. Could have been better if it was longer, But it says that ch.3 is Last Chapter #-.-) It just end like that for her?

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