Weak story line...

Pebbles September 30, 2017 1:24 am

The reason he liked her was kinda... uneventful, to say the least ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍
And i felt like the whole accident with her sister, was unnecessary. It didn't add anything to the story. Like the parents dying makes sense, but the extra tragedy wasn't needed.

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    natsuhi February 23, 2018 11:32 pm

    The extra tragedy adds on to why she’s so negative and why she thinks she’s bring misfortune to those around her. When it happens twice u become convinced you’re a walking disaster