Responses
I definitely agree with you there. The first chapter alone could have been expanded to three to build adequate tension and to get to know the characters. There were a lot of miscommunications and there wasn’t enough breathing room in between for the characters to process them and react. It made the whole thing feel rushed. I do definitely like it, and the art is lovely, but there are some things that break the spell of reading. It just seems that the author had so many ideas that they liked and crammed them in to convey with not enough space to explore them.
The story litrally went from A to Z , its an interesting story but its just too sudden and the choice of characters personality is just too cliche. But still a nice work though.