lol Most of yaoi is too rapey.What did you expect?
Some of them can make it work until you even forget the rape. Some just leave a bad taste in your mouth and ruins the rest of the story. I can ignore some rape, but I will never fault someone else for dropping a story because of it. Although it gets annoying when they complain about it chapters later, cause then it's like "Why are you still here?"
Yeah, sometimes it works with the story and sometimes it's just badly written. Or maybe I was just in a mood... That's why I reserve my opinion on this one. If it's in a story that I like I can just brush it off, but when it's in the first chapter it can be tricky. We'll see...
(And I personally think it's a good thing that my brain does not automatically normalize rape just because it's a yaoi. I know the genre well, I like it, I know what to expect ! And yet I like to still be in touch with my reality ;) )
That was a bit too rapey for me... I'll wait for more chapters before making an opinion.