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Yeah, I think this plot would've worked pretty well with a bigger page count. As it is, it's definitely not the most rushed thing I've read in a while.
I agree there's just something so vexing how swift the transition is but overall it's entertaining and aesthetically pleasing. (´∀｀)♡
okay so the reason why is it so fast paced and quite confusing along the way is bc it only has 5 chapters lmao still if the author prolonged this story a bit more it'd be such a good read , it has potential. I'm kinda in love with the art ♡♡♡