It seems to be the start of a cute stroy.

RockCandy13 December 13, 2017 1:20 pm

The only issues I have is with the grammar. It might be because I am a writer myself that I constantly am looking for errors, but it is making me constantly reread things over and over again to make sense of it in my head. I feel like someone used google translate, and didn't take the time to fix the grammar. That may sound rude, and if it does I really don't mean it. I'm happy that the person translated this and very thankful. I just think they need to fix the grammar. I'm going to get a shit load of dislikes aren't I? *Sigh* Oh well.

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    Shao_Ye12 December 13, 2017 5:21 pm

    Nope, you won't...I will try my best to fix back those chapters before I post the latest one... ^^!!

    Sorry for making it so hard to read...

    Another extra note: If Chapter 0 and Chapter 1 also unreadable then I got nothing more to say..... ( ̄ε(# ̄)Σ

    Till Then!!