I agree, its a little boring, but overall it was ok.
I think so too... I wouldn't call it boring, but it's a little bland... Even so, it was a pleasant story... I think it would be interesting if Aya and the main girl was a single person instead, a girl who shows a cooler exterior about guys but is curious about love/ got rejected once and she was REALLY staying clear of him, not being curious or involving herself anymore. Plus make her a little more blunt and cool, but she sometimes blushes or laughs aloud. I don't have anything more to add to my fantasy except that the guy wants her to fall in love with him but doesn't say that and instead slowly changes from a flirty guy to a more serious guy or something like that.
Sure, but on 35 pages?
I like the connection about the snake and posioun and dont get me wrong it was CUTE but a little boring no excitement a transparent story