I liked the story, but the end just didn't match the intensity of the plot. Aside from just Rene's disappearing for 6 months with no word is not really explained (sure he might need to leave but he couldn't stay in touch???), there's the abrupt end. The sudden loss of Iro's business (what will he do?) and the fact that Rene said that he had yet to trust Iro (does he now?). So this better not be the end, because I assume with all these loose ends there's a bit more. It sure does need a bit more.
Not to mention the guy who was sick and looked like he was NOT ABOUT to leave those two in peace. PLUS getting the secretary to realize Iro had changed and wasn't the "bad" guy she remembered. SO much potential left in the dust by a hurried, uninteresting and sloppy conclusion.
I liked the story, but the end just didn't match the intensity of the plot. Aside from just Rene's disappearing for 6 months with no word is not really explained (sure he might need to leave but he couldn't stay in touch???), there's the abrupt end. The sudden loss of Iro's business (what will he do?) and the fact that Rene said that he had yet to trust Iro (does he now?). So this better not be the end, because I assume with all these loose ends there's a bit more. It sure does need a bit more.