Beautiful art and beautiful storytelling. The writing and character development were both smooth and thorough. If there was one change I could make, it would be reducing the time spent on Ayumu's friendship with his classmate and Yuuichi's friendship with the classmate's mom and dedicating that time to exploring more of how Yuuichi fell in love with Ryou. Or, keep the friend and mom, but add another chapter in the middle exploring Yuuichi's feelings and their growth. The story was beautiful as it is, but it felt slightly rushed in the "when did Yuuichi fall so in love" area. Aside from that, this is a perfect, five star manga IMHO.
Beautiful art and beautiful storytelling. The writing and character development were both smooth and thorough. If there was one change I could make, it would be reducing the time spent on Ayumu's friendship with his classmate and Yuuichi's friendship with the classmate's mom and dedicating that time to exploring more of how Yuuichi fell in love with Ryou. Or, keep the friend and mom, but add another chapter in the middle exploring Yuuichi's feelings and their growth. The story was beautiful as it is, but it felt slightly rushed in the "when did Yuuichi fall so in love" area. Aside from that, this is a perfect, five star manga IMHO.