I don't like how fast and casual this manga is...

Sanquin June 25, 2018 1:25 am

The story just moves so...fast. And everything is dealt with so casually. "Oh I have a kid now." "Oh the wolves came back and left again, and oh they found and hunted in a dungeon." "Oh I just quickly made 3 baths instead of one."

It feels like I'm reading a summary of weekly activities in someone's diary rather than a manga story...

Responses
    Hellooooooooo June 25, 2018 5:10 am

    its like one of those "build your own civilization" games but with just slightly more visuals huh..

    Sanquin June 25, 2018 10:34 am

    Yea, that analogy would work pretty good as well. :P

    An Absolute Unit June 25, 2018 4:20 pm

    I kinda like it! I've found that some isekai manga move too slowly and aren't as interesting. The pacing in this is fast, but I think it's part of its charm.

    Sierra June 25, 2018 8:39 pm

    And the constant - spring came; winter came, we built a house

    Hellooooooooo June 25, 2018 10:51 pm
    I kinda like it! I've found that some isekai manga move too slowly and aren't as interesting. The pacing in this is fast, but I think it's part of its charm. An Absolute Unit

    Yeah the insanely fast pacing is probrobly its most redeemable trait especially for impatient folks like me lol

    Rain June 25, 2018 10:53 pm

    Reminds we of a web novel I'm reading that sometimes makes me want to scream "That's it. I'm not reading anymore". Like when a new enemy shows up and it's hard to fight and then this new fighting method is introduced. They thought of it months ago and has been practicing? Funny, you didn't mention that a few chapters ago when you told about how much everyone had improved and how the training was going.

    Sanquin June 26, 2018 1:28 am
    Yeah the insanely fast pacing is probrobly its most redeemable trait especially for impatient folks like me lol Hellooooooooo

    A good story doesn't need pacing this fast. As it'll keep you hooked even if it goes slowly. Stories like The New Gate, or Kumo desu ka?, or Isekai Yakkyoku. Heck stories that go faster can work too if done well. Take RE:Monster, or Choujin Koukousei-tachi.

    This is...the bad kind of fast-paced imo. Like the author is just quickly going through the motions. I don't feel any passion from the story, and it all feels like a summary rather than a proper story. Heck, several years have already passed in the manga.

    Hellooooooooo June 28, 2018 4:27 am
    A good story doesn't need pacing this fast. As it'll keep you hooked even if it goes slowly. Stories like The New Gate, or Kumo desu ka?, or Isekai Yakkyoku. Heck stories that go faster can work too if done wel... Sanquin

    I read a few other stories like kumo already for my long reads but sometimes you're curious about some story you run into that's got a few concepts you like but ofc doesnt hit all of the things you want. If it's a short read and you got time to kill, might as well take a peak and see if they've got something to rave about yet lol