I started reading this fantastic story with incredible potential and right in the middle... It's over. Then, I was pleased to see another chapter... where they delay becoming intimate for a year. As it was, the relationship between the two protagonists was tenuous and even expositional dialogue, character's actions or character's thoughts didn't really give many hints as to how the two felt about each other. To abruptly throw them into a lover's embrace seemed ill timed and rushed. This story had the potential to fill volumes with interesting conflicts and heartwarming resolutions and it ends in one and a half chapters. Sad. But it is an unfortunate fact that this happens sometimes. A story will not continue if there is not enough demand for it. Ah well, better luck next time.
I started reading this fantastic story with incredible potential and right in the middle... It's over. Then, I was pleased to see another chapter... where they delay becoming intimate for a year. As it was, the relationship between the two protagonists was tenuous and even expositional dialogue, character's actions or character's thoughts didn't really give many hints as to how the two felt about each other. To abruptly throw them into a lover's embrace seemed ill timed and rushed. This story had the potential to fill volumes with interesting conflicts and heartwarming resolutions and it ends in one and a half chapters. Sad. But it is an unfortunate fact that this happens sometimes. A story will not continue if there is not enough demand for it. Ah well, better luck next time.