The author of this is prob stupid or a part time thing for her and not taking it seriously but..i'll still say it,there were too many plotholes,and i dont like the 1st story..felt like ayumu was a substitute for his brother to the seme..like the way ayumu has feelings for seme is resonable,but its waaayyy too fast for the seme,people dont connect/love each other that fast,it felt like seme was still seeing a part of atsushi in ayumu and just not saying it
The author of this is prob stupid or a part time thing for her and not taking it seriously but..i'll still say it,there were too many plotholes,and i dont like the 1st story..felt like ayumu was a substitute for his brother to the seme..like the way ayumu has feelings for seme is resonable,but its waaayyy too fast for the seme,people dont connect/love each other that fast,it felt like seme was still seeing a part of atsushi in ayumu and just not saying it