Responses
you're so right she's confused the two and we end up with nothing with the mix she has - convoluted plot and boring sex because the story flow is senseless
Still, considering the fact that she’s putting time and effort in something for free, it doesn’t feel that big of a problem
Tho it’s sad that the story could’ve been much better mixed with the art
Really, this author has no idea what’s the difference between a sex based manga which the only purpose and plot is sex, and a manga which is supposed to be more emotional
The plot is great
However, the author doesn’t seem to have any idea about a sex based manga and an emotional manga. She/he is just making it longer without knowing what we want to see or were expecting to see
There are endless sex scenes
And less emotional interaction as the story goes on
But it was clearly supposed to be a manga which focuses on the plot
The story has ups and downs, it’s annoying, but that’s a part of the plot
But my problem is that the sex scenes don’t even belong here
Like’see you again’
Despite the happy ending, there were a lot of useless sex scenes and there was ten pages of sex without any emotional or plot progression
It’s such a waste to destroy good plot and characters just to add more sex scenes
I just think the author is creative, but probably needs more experience which is okay and all mangakas have been there