
Dumb? Insults now, really? There are many yaoi comics out there that are utter stereotyopes and in which the same story get told over and over again. That don't even try to develop a decent plot, let alone character development.
I wasn't too fond of the huuuge number of sex scenes but that's okay I guess, since Shiwoo uses it as a way to escape his lingering depression. The themes are dark, difficult to deal with, and not necessarily perfectly explored or explained, but better try and fail than fail to try; the characters are flawed, and that's nice cause real people are too. Do all stories have to be cutesy-lovey-dovey or classical ? Does that mean it should be taken down and the author is dumb?
There's way worse than this out there btw. Things that really make you uncomfortable. And no, as long as there's some depht to it, and it's properly rated, it's fine to me.

Saying someone is dumb and should go to rehab and should have their stuff taken down definitely is an insult. Opinions aren't expressed with imperatives, so no. There's this thing called respect that makes everyone's life better. And calling me sweetie isn't respectful either.
And I couldn't care less what your type of read is, all I was saying was THIS one wasn't cute. Ah, this is leading nowhere.
Yo this is what you get when a psycho can draw and happens to love the yaoi stereotype of pretty-and-defenseless-uke-and-the-strong-seme tooo intensely—put whoever wrote this in rehab and take this story down—Thank you very much.