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Well, your critique helped me to decide NOT to read it! Thanks, my friend!(▰˘◡˘▰)
My pleasure
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Well, your critique helped me to decide NOT to read it! Thanks, my friend!(▰˘◡˘▰)
My pleasure
Dont do this to yourself !
But if you want an incoherent story with constant location changes seminngly no real introductions, zero common sense behind any decision (like runing into a burning hospital) and a female main character that first knocks a dude out by throwing a glass ball out of the window and then proceedes to tell him that she is his wife as well as literally after the fathers passing packes up everything including her little sister (or just some random drawf that follows her around again NO REAL CHARACTER INTRODUCTIONS) to bexome a star in the big city oh and also own a magical necklace then go right ahead an proceeded with this incomprehensible abomination of a story but one day you will have to explain yourself to a higher power
(Im sorry if anyone feels attacked by my "review" but this just took a away half an hour of my life im never gonna get back (half an hour because i needed breaks inbetween i thoughg i was having a stroke)