this story is cute... very simple and a bit generic-- but i found the dialogue and actions of the characters quite realistic. Like it wasn't ever off putting or overly exaggerated like many of the bl i've come across.
Also the seme is an actual sweetheart, which thank god. he's not overly pushy or dominant, not a player or asshole-- and although he made some homophobic comments, he quickly corrected himself and apologized. hmmm
this story is cute... very simple and a bit generic-- but i found the dialogue and actions of the characters quite realistic. Like it wasn't ever off putting or overly exaggerated like many of the bl i've come across.
Also the seme is an actual sweetheart, which thank god. he's not overly pushy or dominant, not a player or asshole-- and although he made some homophobic comments, he quickly corrected himself and apologized. hmmm