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Its just slow paced i guess...lets see and wait. Hahah maybe it will get even more interesting.
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Its just slow paced i guess...lets see and wait. Hahah maybe it will get even more interesting.
This story’s plot is really very light. I am not saying I hate it, not at all, the story is very cutesy and heartwarming but it doesn’t have the stuff it needs to be, so that it can draw the readers in.
Like an antagonist or the rising and falling action. It’s just kinda there, I hope the story doesn’t just remain like this because the art is really beautiful.
It’s already drawn people in with it’s gorgeous art I hope it will also draw people in with the plot as well.