I've read better one shots than this. This story didn't really flow well and it felt like things were a little forced. This is typical of a lot of one shots so I try to keep an open mind when reading them. Even if this had more chapters I still don't think the story would have been that great.
I've read better one shots than this. This story didn't really flow well and it felt like things were a little forced. This is typical of a lot of one shots so I try to keep an open mind when reading them. Even if this had more chapters I still don't think the story would have been that great.