hm i love the characters and the brat x daddy type dynamic but I find the pacing weird here? With the other two couples the chapters always feel nicely paced and well-rounded but here it feels rushed but also kind of slow because some dialogue, monologue and panels feel repetitive? It's weird to me because the other new couple with Huan Wen and the pink haired guy has perfect pace and ties in perfectly into the main story. But this couple here doesn't do this and just feels off in comparison to the rest of the comic.
hm i love the characters and the brat x daddy type dynamic but I find the pacing weird here? With the other two couples the chapters always feel nicely paced and well-rounded but here it feels rushed but also kind of slow because some dialogue, monologue and panels feel repetitive? It's weird to me because the other new couple with Huan Wen and the pink haired guy has perfect pace and ties in perfectly into the main story.
But this couple here doesn't do this and just feels off in comparison to the rest of the comic.