This writting style bothers me. It's told us that the main chick is strong, but had never shown it. Show don't tell! It only tells us she's strong & expects us to believe it. So far she's cried alot. She still seems raw from whatever happened to her father, although plenty of time has clearly passed. If she cries at the drop of a hat, when it's related to her dad. She's not strong. She's still recovering.
This writting style bothers me. It's told us that the main chick is strong, but had never shown it. Show don't tell! It only tells us she's strong & expects us to believe it. So far she's cried alot. She still seems raw from whatever happened to her father, although plenty of time has clearly passed. If she cries at the drop of a hat, when it's related to her dad. She's not strong. She's still recovering.