So many things about this story has holes and problems.
Since when was it legal to kidnap people forcefully? Torture a person about their past until they faint. And just because the ML realized he loved her and wants her to stay with him. He forces her into a contract where she has to work as a maid to pay for damages when attempting to desperately escape.
Additionally, he locked her into an area with bars like a criminal until she passed out then while she was unconscious forged a contract, where she either works or goes to prison. In addition, the ML claims he never tried to stop her from leaving. Then why would she have to come up with a plan then to set of a fire to cause a distract. If he never tried to stop her?!
Like there was 0 build up plot for a reason to like the ML and his children. And how does the FL's so called sister not be able to recognize her cause of a single spot on her face.
Plot: 1 stars (There is a lot of missing key parts that could have made the story good. One being a background story for why the children like the FL.) Characters: 1 stars (I feel severe lacking in brains from everyone in the story. I cannot really say there is much for personality besides male yandere and stereotypical evil sister antagonist.) Development: 1 stars (It is going to be slow one. I expect very little development in under 75 chapters. Besides more mental torture for the FL.)
So many things about this story has holes and problems.
Since when was it legal to kidnap people forcefully? Torture a person about their past until they faint. And just because the ML realized he loved her and wants her to stay with him. He forces her into a contract where she has to work as a maid to pay for damages when attempting to desperately escape.
Additionally, he locked her into an area with bars like a criminal until she passed out then while she was unconscious forged a contract, where she either works or goes to prison. In addition, the ML claims he never tried to stop her from leaving. Then why would she have to come up with a plan then to set of a fire to cause a distract. If he never tried to stop her?!
Like there was 0 build up plot for a reason to like the ML and his children. And how does the FL's so called sister not be able to recognize her cause of a single spot on her face.
Plot: 1 stars (There is a lot of missing key parts that could have made the story good. One being a background story for why the children like the FL.)
Characters: 1 stars (I feel severe lacking in brains from everyone in the story. I cannot really say there is much for personality besides male yandere and stereotypical evil sister antagonist.)
Development: 1 stars (It is going to be slow one. I expect very little development in under 75 chapters. Besides more mental torture for the FL.)