I actually thought this story might get an isekai treatment, which I appreciate. Too many ...

Soseki November 1, 2019 9:56 am

I actually thought this story might get an isekai treatment, which I appreciate. Too many stories give their characters the get a free life card to fix their life errors.

However, I did get the feeling that the story kinda rushed to give Leslie her Cinderella ending. Also... I was getting VERY confusing mixed messages. The first being that duke n duchess were getting too interchanged that when she was finally introduced I got STRONG yuri vibes (mostly because she had a female butler). My second confusing message was that I was kinda expecting Leslie to join the family. Essentially, she would be raised by them in preparation to marry one of the sons, but reading on its clear that her love interest is that Altera boy. (Which is still weird cus he goes to school with Entei and I assume Entei is around 20)

Anyways I may have buried the lead but I really like the story. Honestly now that I think about it I kinda wish they made her power more temperamental (maybe show off more sentience or personality to the shadows). It would have given more depth to her transition to a happily ever after.

Responses
    Issa November 1, 2019 3:44 pm

    I hate the idea that when a women is masculine people assume she’s gonna be a lesbian also none of the ages have been really been said but Leslie’s and we don’t know how to the school ages work it could go by knowledge wether than age

    Soseki November 1, 2019 8:19 pm
    I hate the idea that when a women is masculine people assume she’s gonna be a lesbian also none of the ages have been really been said but Leslie’s and we don’t know how to the school ages work it could g... Issa

    First of all... There's more to assume she could be lesbian than just her being masculine. She's got power, a title and is widely feared. There was no mention of her husband at the time and she had a female butler. She's also a royal figure (you could assume she had kids out of duty than love... Royals tend to have offspring through any means)

    Honestly when I think about it, for a royal family they're almost too put together. Even their servants appear too lively when Leslie eats. Just seems a bit disjointed considering that the family has a rumor that instills fear in people.