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Foonime November 11, 2019 5:33 am

A lot of people have said that this was cute, but mediocre. I agree with that because I thought it had a good build up until the end of chapter 3 and then it falls flat for me personally. I feel like there should’ve been more showings of Akira feeling good being with Shogo and his debate to bottom. I liked the fact that there was a lot of consideration for what to do in the relationship, but what about with each other? I also don’t get why yaoi jumps straight to anal sex. Building up to anal would’ve been great. I also see why people feel that Shogo was not a good seme and I think it’s because the author didn’t establish him as a important figure for Akira. Akira says he warms a room up just by being around but that was after sex, what else is there to Shogo? To me a good seme regardless of appearance is someone the uke trusts to be vulnerable with. We lack the reason why Akira is vulnerable with Shogo. Shogo would be been a good bottom because of his trust and admiration for Akira. Does Akira trust Shogo? Does he even truly love him? That is what makes him a bad top

Responses
    final_epoch November 11, 2019 2:38 pm

    Honestly I wanna see a chapter where they switch since it seemed like it’s both their first time

    Lily November 12, 2019 4:35 am

    You have an interesting point of view

    Foonime November 12, 2019 5:10 am
    Honestly I wanna see a chapter where they switch since it seemed like it’s both their first time final_epoch

    I full agree! I think this couple would be much better without strict roles of top and bottom