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you lost me at “Her husband is extremely powerful but first really solve her problems.”
you lost me at “Her husband is extremely powerful but doesn’t* really solve her problems.”
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you lost me at “Her husband is extremely powerful but first really solve her problems.”
you lost me at “Her husband is extremely powerful but doesn’t* really solve her problems.”
Drama Level 10/10 (She runs into problems so much in a single day. Constant female rivals that appear to have nothing better to do in their lives.)
Logic Level 1/10 (Almost nothing makes sense in this story and parts feel skipped over. She got cheated on and goes to marry the first guy on a blind date with her. She constantly goes drinking for various reason and ends up in trouble. She does not stay home to take care of her sick mother. Her husband seems extremely powerful but not really solving her problems.)
Characters at least seem to have some personalities. Intelligence level of everyone is questionable at best. I hope she tells her parents soon that she got married and her husband shows up at the her company as proof that she is 100% married for her rivals and ex-boyfriend to see.