Totally fine with everything so far, but add a little romance to it. For example, in chapter 36 when gyuh-wool is raising his knife at jinyoo to keep him from escaping instead of actually cutting Jinyoo it would be perfect if wool did this: *looks into his eyes* "I can't hurt you" *lowering the knife*... All I want is foreshadowing that jinyoo and gyuh-wool will be together
Totally fine with everything so far, but add a little romance to it. For example, in chapter 36 when gyuh-wool is raising his knife at jinyoo to keep him from escaping instead of actually cutting Jinyoo it would be perfect if wool did this: *looks into his eyes* "I can't hurt you" *lowering the knife*... All I want is foreshadowing that jinyoo and gyuh-wool will be together