I don't like this one bit. The premise is great and I liked the characters but it's WAAAAA...

akera January 13, 2020 4:15 pm

I don't like this one bit. The premise is great and I liked the characters but it's WAAAAAY too soon for her to fall in love with him. She went from thinking he'll abandon her and fearing that to being obsessed with loving him...
It's too fast and although they made a little progress in understanding each other compared to the first day they got married but it's nowhere near enough for romance to be introduced and for us readers to go through the angst of unrequired love

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    kiara January 13, 2020 5:37 pm

    Well if you or i were in situation like she went trough, it would be same for us to want love to be cared for and get attached by them ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍ just feel the feeling don't think too much however i would wish for her to be strong and arrogant type of a orson as she went trough hell probably boish type girl ..man that would have been lit