The story has potential but it’s poorly executed! It’s so very choppy! It’s all over...

Laito Sakamaki January 24, 2020 7:30 pm

The story has potential but it’s poorly executed! It’s so very choppy! It’s all over the place! But still thankful for the author! Every story is one to be thankful for!(▰˘◡˘▰)

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    T-raw January 25, 2020 3:27 am

    what a roller coaster this comment is