ignore the downvotes i agree with u tbh. this had so much potential in the beginning. we dont need 3-5 smut chapters. 2 is enough and it should be spaced out imo. the relationship is rushed for sure. unfortunately like most yaoi.. the idea is there but it doesnt get delivered. the author's art is amazing tho and i really appreciate the people uploading this.
I have to agree but I think some people are assuming this storys suppose to be some kind of gem bc of how beautiful the artstyle is but thats obviously not the case. I feel like its really rare to find a BL author who can provide amazing artwork while simultaneously demonstrating a beautiful and creative story. Really really rare. Most lezhin works are pretty much the same tropes reused anyway so we shouldnt place our expectations too high lmfao
Don't ignore the downvotes. You deserve them. Hope I won't see you here again. (⌒▽⌒)
period
yall are so musty LMAO
can someone have their opinion ????? god forbid someone disagree with the story's route and hope for the story to improve
dang, i don't know why this made me chuckle.
Sometimes its not about the story but the art. And uniqueness. This is by far the most beautifully drawn colored manga out there. The effort is all over the place. The detail facial expression is there and the story was original.
This comment took me the fuck out! Hahahahaha!
HIATUS for 2 weeks though. You people should kuku kill me.
Ignore this kind of unwanted opinion, OP! This is a free forum, so why can't they voice what they want when you can? Especially since lzh doesn't have comment section for readers to give feedback...
And i agree with everything the OP said, but I do admit the art of this is very good, since ancient setting is harder to depict than modern ones.,.so that is one plus value, but it stops there...
Unfortunately, most of lzh newcoming comics nowadays are all like this not just for yaoi but for F/M smut as well, know why? Cuz it's easier to score money, attract subcriptions and readers with smut-focus ones...the plot doesn't need to be developed much...Getting writer's block? Simple, just give smut chapters for 3 chapters in a row... and for characters, they just throw the most cliche ones, dominating jerk semes and helpless ukes who will eventually fall in love for their rapists.. no need to develop much for that either cuz the focus are on the sex scenes, the kinkier the better...and if the sell was good, the story will drag on...we can see these troupes are everywhere in smut webtoons yet just see how high these smut webtoons dominating top ranks ...cuz ppl just simply will nvr get bored with porn...The same reason porn industry are very rich and highly sought everywhere.
The shounen ai webtoons are much better options if u're looking for decent plot and great arts as well...
I only keep lzh app now for the sake of those chapters in my library I used to buy regularly years ago that didn't end up with me stop reading midway like I always do now cuz the story gets worse I cannot take it anymore and wasted my coins lol..namely dark heaven, KM, starry sky, hush, etc. they are all either finished or move out of there lol...the good old ones
Na I think this is the tip of the ice berg. Can you not feel the ground shake? Something big is about to happen. Especially since her just lit that letter on fire
He*
Now UNLESS you havent read the raws
this whole thread goes to show how people don't respect the opinions of others smh, "You deserve them".
Have you see Heaven's official blessings? That brush strokes and color gradations are one of a kind too, vibrants but still have those dark and mysterious background...everyone is so pretty and the details of their faces make them look vividly alive..i highly recommend that one for those looking for great art
Everyone has the right to share and have an opinion, but i don't understand when you say this story is just about smut now while complaining also that the sex scene are too rushed...(??).
So you do you hate the smut or do you not hate it? Because your words are contradicting.
About the story, I think we will see some development here though we must be patient about this manhwa; manhwas/uas can be quite long and compared to others that reached one hundred ++ like chapters, this one's still pretty short.
If we considerer the story in its globality, the events can happened, be summed up, in two weeks at most between the first time Seungho and Nak had sex (drunk NK), and now. So yeah, we can lose track about the purpose of the story or the actions of the characters, but if we reread it in one go, it's still makes sense.
The chapters are quite short and I think author-nim is doing their best (they're humanst too...). The chapters were mostly focused on the interactions between SH and NK since the drunk night they had, but now we get to see Jiwhore again and surely a new protagonist... Patience :)
LMao i don't care about the down votes, im just gonna pour all my criticism in the comment section ;)
Him not sleeping and burning that letter and his lover crying showed real development to me. Particularly the burned letter
Yes I agree to that. Usually SH looks so stoic like he doesn't care about what's going on much, or he can flip humor to 180° and hurt someone like he doesn't care about the consequences, but I think he knows that this is not the way he should behave around Nak. He cares for the first time about what may think someone else than his very person. The fact that Nak seems so be so scared of him must affect him.
About the Letterman, although he burnt it, this one must works him enough for SH to write back...
This is just about smut now, no character development whatsoever the sex is too rushed and the plot is not explored enough. It's getting boring tbh