There are different types of art and for you to call this sensei's art the making of a noob because you're an avid yaoi reader is completely ignorant of you.
Id have to agree with Reply. I admit the story line was more along the lines for a beginning yaoi reader but non the less it was cute. I have been reading yaoi for over ten years now and have probably read almost every yaoi posted here on mangago and many other sights (as well as purchased many volumes of yaoi) To say the art is that of a noob is pure ignorance. For one I have seen yaoi art that is a LOT and I mean A LOT worst than this but it was still good (good story) To all those willing to read this far then read the story and make your own opinion. It's really not half bad. It would be better if it was longer but its still very cute and the art is pretty decent.
I agree with all the replies. There are much worst art styles than this, and some of them are yaoi authors who have published at least 20 stories and people love it. They aren't wrong to love it, they just have different taste. I think you need to read it and decide for yourself if the style isn't "your type." I loved the story and the weird quirky brothers, it was funny and awkwardly cute. The main character has his work cut out for him.
OK if ur a constant yaoi reader like me and have read many manga with well art i will tell u this manga isnt to my standards i didnt like the drawing reminded me of a noob on his 3 manga but i stuck threw it the story was Ehhh ok i didnt like the seme 1st and when he confessed it was like whatever his brother had more passion than him even in the kiss trust me its not worth ur yaoi time theirs more yaoi that is amazing to explore