Wew you wrote a lot xD IMO I think the story gave a good indication that Evan's mind was continuously thinking about magic and its uses especially that he could create his own magic. When he was forced to gain everything of Karl Lind's, his brain didn't stop thinking aboit magic, and hig knowledge was enhanced by getting all of Karl's knowledge, so it doesn't seem unlikely that he would take very little time to understand how to control and manifest golums.
On the ending part, is seemed as if the author really didn't want to show an epic battle because of how the characters personalities were, for example, like how Evan, despite being a child but having profound curiosity and knowledge having a big epic fight scene would be bogged downdown by Evan's thoughts and strategies. With Sera, she wasn't given many "thought bubbles" and would just do as Evan says no matter the situation. For the flow of the story, and for the reader peace of mind, I think the ending was a well placed and this is the ending they came up with. Also Baldo or whatever the dragons name is they defeated, was frozen, instead of killed so that magic would continue to flow in both worlds which is something Evan surely thought of while remembering his past as Karl, how if magic didn't exist, Sera and all of the other non-human races could/would disappear if magic no longer existed in either of the worlds. An ineresting end to say the least! I liked your rant tho! ヾ(☆▽☆)
I totally agree !!!
This is a couple of hundred words wasted in mental gyrations, explaining how a BAD ending is better than it ISN'T.
Uhhh okay sure? XD I wrote this back in june and you read and then commented on something with the mentality to make me feel bad? XD whatever dude/lady. It wasn't a bad ending for me and that was what I was trying to say. You ended up reading the entire thing and thats what I wanted from other viewers anyways so welcome to the system! ლ(´ڡ`ლ)
I apologize to you for causing any offense. I should have expressed my opinion without piggybacking on your specific comments. I take your point and thank you for your polite response.
b-bruh... why you gotta do us dirty like that with that ending...
Otherwise I really did like this. It was interesting. I just wish it was longer. It also felt a bit rushed, like the author was pushing through this story... and they managed to rush it even more with that end. I would have loved for there to have been more of a struggle for Even before all this power was just handed to him. Don't get me wrong, he did work hard in the beginning... but all that kinda just goes to waste when you just have things handed to you, well in this case they were basically forced upon him. It would have been nice if they had a bit more adventures with bits of the main plot occurring here and there until he gathered a lot of information and skill. It would also make sense if, you know, he had to get used to the power that the new parts? that were introduced to him gave him. He also picked up moving and creating golems really quickly... It just felt like it was just tone thing after another with this story and that there was no time to rest... Like, right after you are done with one thing you are tossed right into the next problem... and with that end it feels like the author just couldn't come up with a good battle that the 'magic that was unique to him' could be used to defeat a big ol' Mr dragon, so they just skipped to the after... like they gave up or something. To me it just feels like a lazy end...
I did really like that sorta twist with the that world being one in the same as their own and how magic came to be. That was interesting, but I was able to predict most of what came from that... that's not a bad thing though.
I just checked the length of this thing and I should stop before I get into more things like the characters themselves... sorry that this is so long and kinda all over the place (⊙…⊙ ) I have a bad habit of writing too much...