honestly I wouldn't have minded this but they really (in my opinion) messed up on some things
1. he was a loser in his past life. it's weird that he even sacrificed himself for someone because it doesn't even feel like that would be his personality. he's gross, annoying, and really shows no potential for anything because he hasn't worked for literally ANYTHING.
a better example of the character i want to see is from "The Second Coming Of Gluttony" where sure, the MC went through rough patches but wasn't the worst person. and when given their second chance they made the most of it.
2. WHY ARE THEY MAKING 10 YEARS AND UNDER ACT LIKE THEY'RE 25 IT IS KILLING ME- I work with kids. it's my job. 5 year olds don't talk like that. they just literally talk about whatever is on their minds and get distracted easily. negotiating with the president of the school? the five year olds? seriously? and if they learn faster (other world difference MAYBE) then mention it! the story is all over the place and lacks good storytelling.
3. ALSO- the MC is no longer 29. hes a five year old. I don't like seeing a teacher blush when a five year old says something about her? that's just weird. he needs to at least try to act his age. its rather disgusting because he really was the scum of society before.
sorry i just ranted but my dislike for the story grows more than i think about it
It’s quite lacklustre, the humour they’re tryna implement is dry and not that funny. I personally don’t like the MC’s personality as well. For such an amazing cover the story doesn’t match up for now lmao. Hopefully the future arcs will improve the MC’s character more.