This was really good. Until the last few pages

Samkeesh April 3, 2020 8:13 pm

This was really good.
Until the last few pages

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    Shiyai July 13, 2020 12:26 am

    I need to agree with you on that ..... I was like, 'wait, that's it? What a bland resolution

    Amita4ever August 9, 2020 4:36 am

    Yeah, it wasn’t a bad story until we got to the end and then it was, ‘what?... wait! Huh?’

    He married her because he didn’t want anyone else to and then told he he never wanted to see her again? What? ‘Ownership’ was enough?

    And his lawyer... he seriously never noticed the account HE was in charge of was GAINING money? I mean $60,000 is no small deposit.

    It just made no sense after all that.

    Comadrin August 14, 2020 7:59 am
    Yeah, it wasn’t a bad story until we got to the end and then it was, ‘what?... wait! Huh?’ He married her because he didn’t want anyone else to and then told he he never wanted to see her again? Wh... Amita4ever

    Agree. I loved Hilary, but the guys (except for Umberto, the butler) were boneheads. And since when does one's lawyer become one's Daddy?