
How exactly does it come across as what you've just said if you mind me asking? Do you mostly read Mira or Asagi Ryuu's works?
Not to sound reductive of the genre, but to me it was yaoi that felt more like it was written by people with a fetish for gay men instead of actual understanding of male homosexuality. I'm not even sure if there are any noteable male yaoi mangaka

Oh there are definitely a lot of yaois out there that have that vibe of only being "acceptable" because guy-on-guy is hot, but there's a lot more yaoi compared to Yuri so it's easier to find yaois that don't give that vibe.
I also feel like it's gotten better in the last couple of years compared when I first started reading yaoi (around 2010?).
And noo not just them, I have a hard time trying new yuris just because a lot of the ones I've come across are like that. Especially schoolgirl fantasies that are just fanservice but with no actual progress. I have a whole bunch I just follow now to get update notifications.
Thanks so much for translating this, I really love this Yuri! I'm bi but prefer yaoi smut because Yuri smut usually gives vibes of being written by a 50 y.o. guy with a loli fetish, but this one's different and so interesting! (And hot!)
Also, dude idk why you're insulting your work because the quality's great! Scans are clean and unwarped, and diagloue flows and makes sense. You're doing awesome thanks for translating this for us.