Read this from the start in one go and I just need some plot development. It's cute but......

angie April 18, 2020 3:34 am

Read this from the start in one go and I just need some plot development. It's cute but... the closest we got to anything is the conversation about murder and the land for the... shrine (I think). This is chapter seventy, there should have been, like, waaaay more by now plot wise.
I do think that there's potential to the story, but the plot need to actually start. Also at this point I'm trying to understand if there is any reason she won't talk to her parents about it. I mean, what does she have to lose? Yes they might bot believe her but for now she just wasted five years doing nothing. Talk to your parants sis.
Yes, it's cute. But it's getting old and it's a shame, cause I do enjoy the characters and I think the plot has planty of potantial. Hope the future chapters will get better!

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    Sketchy April 18, 2020 5:50 am

    Sorry, I accidentally disliked. I meant to like.