Am I the only one who's a bit confused about the pace and atmosphere of this manga? Don't get me wrong, art is 10/10, but it left me with the feeling of "Uhhhh...ok?". Essentially the plot is a bit dark and twisted because of the Seme's personality but the way the plot is written does not give focus to that. It's trying to handle dark and fluff at the same time, but not executing it well in the plot and pace. If this was written by Harada or Ogawa Chise (Caste Haven) or Rihito (Ten Count) then I feel like the dark twist and the fluff would have played out better.
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Right. I like the concept. I like the idea behind these two characters. Their story has so much depth potential and I just did not enjoy the wasted opportunity that's all. Art is still 10/10 though
Am I the only one who's a bit confused about the pace and atmosphere of this manga? Don't get me wrong, art is 10/10, but it left me with the feeling of "Uhhhh...ok?". Essentially the plot is a bit dark and twisted because of the Seme's personality but the way the plot is written does not give focus to that. It's trying to handle dark and fluff at the same time, but not executing it well in the plot and pace. If this was written by Harada or Ogawa Chise (Caste Haven) or Rihito (Ten Count) then I feel like the dark twist and the fluff would have played out better.