I like the story, but SORRY IF I WAS RUDE but their relationship was a little bit weird. I...

Wit. April 22, 2020 7:54 pm

I like the story, but SORRY IF I WAS RUDE but their relationship was a little bit weird. I don't feel like they are trusting in each other, and I didn't get emotional from their relationship. when the seme kiss the uke in chapter 2 he wipes his mouth, is he was disgusting or what? I didn't really get it! Even in chapter 3 when he hugged him he was like hurry!!
And like the others I don't trust what seme said, he was too suspicious. And I feel like there is a lot of ambiguity in the story, but maybe that what makes the story unique! I hope there is V 2 explain their relationship more than this.
And finally, thank you uploader san for your hard work.

Responses
    Riri April 23, 2020 3:08 pm

    I feel the same when I finished it I said oh it’s good I love it but there’s something weird about it

    raika00 April 29, 2020 5:01 am

    I searched for the part you said about mugi wiping his mouth after kissing roku but didn’t find it
    Even the part when he hugged him in a hurry

    Wit. April 29, 2020 5:47 am
    I searched for the part you said about mugi wiping his mouth after kissing roku but didn’t find it Even the part when he hugged him in a hurry raika00

    In chapter 2 Page 15 he wipes his mouth, in chapter 3 Page 14 when he hugged him he said in his self hurry

    raika00 April 29, 2020 5:22 pm
    In chapter 2 Page 15 he wipes his mouth, in chapter 3 Page 14 when he hugged him he said in his self hurry Wit.

    Oh sorry
    I thought you said the seme was the one who wiped his mouth and was in a hurry when he hugged the uke
    Actually, all those actions the uke made were because they weren’t dating yet
    Him wiping his lips cuz he was shy I think!
    And even the hug part
    The uke didn’t make his mind to date the seme yet
    He even told him to become friends

    Sorry if my English was bad =_=“

    Wit. April 29, 2020 7:50 pm
    Oh sorry I thought you said the seme was the one who wiped his mouth and was in a hurry when he hugged the ukeActually, all those actions the uke made were because they weren’t dating yetHim wiping his lips c... raika00

    Oh thank you for correcting me!! it didn't come to my mind that maybe he was shy or he was want to be friends.
    U have a point! Thank you again, and I'm sorry i feel like i oppressed them because i didn't get the meaning.
    And sorry too if my English was bad ╥﹏╥

    raika00 April 30, 2020 6:03 pm
    Oh thank you for correcting me!! it didn't come to my mind that maybe he was shy or he was want to be friends.U have a point! Thank you again, and I'm sorry i feel like i oppressed them because i didn't get the... Wit.

    No problem ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~