The story has a nice plot. The supernatural and the characters are cool. BUT theres so ma...

BeepBopp May 2, 2020 11:37 am

The story has a nice plot. The supernatural and the characters are cool.

BUT theres so many stuff that are random.
The hunters : the are keeping the half-soul inside Teko. It is very dangerous and they still haven’t gained anything from that.

Paulo and Misha : why does Paulo even give a shit about Misha, it’s just a random reincarnated devil or something.

Also, since when does Paulo KNOWS this is Saliou. I’m pretty sure his name was never mentionned or did i miss that?

Also, why did the hunters took Domingo in their team.... how is a simple human supposed to be of help against the most powerful vampire.

These are my thoughts from this chapter alone.

The characters do some weird shits out of nowhere. I still can’t forget how Gabriel went from *get out i dont need hunters* to *ok my babe Saliou is back, please kill the vampire*. And Domingo’s *Paulo is so much trouble, i should kill Gabriel*. These are my top 2 wtf happened moments.

Responses
    juuulya May 2, 2020 11:44 am

    Yeah, it’s gotten really convoluted and confusing. I’m disappointed in how it’s playing out, but I’ll keep reading to see how it ends.

    Snowallison May 2, 2020 12:47 pm

    As for Paulo knowing about Saliou it came up when he transformed into the man during sex. Gabriel called out Saliou's name and such.

    BeepBopp May 2, 2020 10:14 pm
    As for Paulo knowing about Saliou it came up when he transformed into the man during sex. Gabriel called out Saliou's name and such. Snowallison

    That’s not what i meant.
    Paulo know that Gabriel likes Saliou. But Paulo doesmt kmow what Saliou looks like. So when did he find out that the black dude is Saliou